Piyupihu

Author, I just wanted to mention something that made me a little uncomfortable 🥺 Since the story says ML has been obsessed with FL for 12 years, that means he was 23 while she was only 8, and honestly that feels a bit creepy to me. 😭 If you’re open to it, maybe you could reduce the age gap to around 10–11 years, or change the timeline so his feelings/obsession start when she’s older. Of course, it’s completely your choice—I’m just sharing my personal opinion because I’m really enjoying the story. (Heart emoji)

Piyupihu

@Shanviwrites Noo, please don’t apologize! 😂❤️ I actually love discussing the story with you. Thank you for explaining—I understand now, and I’ll patiently wait for the mystery to unfold. 👀✨ I’m really curious about Kabir and Nandini’s past! Keep going, author! 🥰💗
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Shanviwrites

@Piyupihu sorry l comment a little too much long.
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Shanviwrites

@Piyupihu l am sorry if  this story made you comfortable the agegap is very important dear   because kabir is a very powerful man and l know it sound creepy that he is obsessed with Nandini from 12 years but it is because of past l mean something has happened and the story has been just started mystery will start to unfold soon. And kabir is obsessed with her but he is a man he had never interfere in her privacy okk. The moment nandini turned 17 or 18 that was the moment when he start to see her because of some that he get to know. So please understand me also and thanks 🙏❤️ for commenting this. I am sorry if the story made you uncomfortable but l can't change anything in the story for now. And l actually like the way you comment your words felt so true. Thank you very much.🌺✨😊💗
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