SangayChoden690

I loved it the way you wrote your story. Perfect to the point were it can be filmed. You should rather write scripts on it and approach filmmakers.... It's worth reading and will be even more incredible if screened on cinema. I really loved and I couldn't hold the urge to read it over again..... This story is unique, not too much drama and touch of reality and simple and it's very very amazing ...and I like Mohan a lot. The way you present him ,Not too exaggerating yet aura you maintain around him was so real and main reason is that is sensible too sensible and I loved it