Be_passionate

Hello!  I'm writing a story called The Twelve Kingdoms and I was wondering if you could give me any advice on it!  Here is the summary Twelve different kingdoms, Twelve different types of people or so they thought. Each zodiac sign has its own kingdom. Families are being split apart and innocent lives are constantly being taken. King Vaughn of the Aries kingdom has started a war that he believes will lead to a revolution. Twelve Kingdoms, twelve different sides of the war. Who will come out on top?
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