SabrinaPearce8

Makayla_Lynn05

I love your book “The Morteson Family.” Sorry of I spelt that wrong. I’d really appreciate it if you’d check out mine, and possibly give some feedback? Thank you! ❤️

SabrinaPearce8

@Makayla_Lynn05 Thank you so much, I really appreciate this lovely feedback ❤️ I will immediately :)
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Black_Rose22342

Thank you so much, for following!!! 

SabrinaPearce8

@Blackliver28 Thank you so much, it means a lot to me! :)
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Black_Rose22342

@Blackliver28 oww no problem!! I LOVED IT.. Keep up the good work 
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AndreaVonReding

Thanks so much for following back!
          
          If you have time, it would be awesome if you could check out “The Tale of Tugarin”.
          
          Of course, I’m more than happy to read your works and leave some feedback in the comments!
          
          https://my.w.tt/WoGDD7hLo3

SabrinaPearce8

@AndreaVonReding 
            Since this is my first book, I would really appreciate it if you could focus on character development. It is something that I'm aiming at the most. 
            
            Also, I've read the first two chapters of your book, and I have to be completely honest: your writing is really captivating and the descriptions are simply amazing. I will surely stick to the end of the book! Amazing job!
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AndreaVonReding

@SabrinaPearce8 Absolutely! Is there anything in particular that I should focus on when giving feedback (grammar, plot, character development etc.)?
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SabrinaPearce8

@AndreaVonReding You're welcome :) ❤ 
            
            I will add it to my reading list and make sure to leave some feedback. I'm sure it's an amazing story!
            
            It would be very nice if you could check out my sci-fi book The Homecoming, it's going to be updated in a few days ❤
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