seaerios2ng8i
Dо уоu publish оn Neobook ?
flowersforophelia
Thank you so much for the follow and for voting for the contents of ‘Gods of Dusk’! I hope you like it when it comes out! <3
saddazais
Thank you ! <3
TooHungryAndLazy
Thanks for voting on Duende <3
_adiin_
Thanks so much for the votes
Ghost081882675
You dropped your crown, please take it. You read my whole book in a day plus followed. Thank you.
Roryfu
@CaptainSpaceToaster Uuh, well it was unusual how detailed his past is, but in a good way. It really makes him more like an actual character in the story rather than just someone random in it. I think you're really doing a good job. Maybe the development isn't showing that much yet, but it's fine if it shows later. I can't really give tips tho, this isn't my native language, so sorry about that or any mistakes.
Ghost081882675
@CaptainSpaceToaster Pfft if you say so. Honestly wished I hand tweaked a few things just so everything seemed to go smoother and be more understandable, also a be better character development. Got any tips or thoughts when you were reading? It would help out! positive or negative