@RiniJoel
Hi there i hope you will accept my advice. You are a good writer but your story is like a summary not a whole book. You summarize what's going to happen instead of taking it step by step. You are rushing too much and it feels like you want to summarize your whole plot on first few chapters. You can be great so just relax and enjoy your story, keep us in suspense don't reveal everything too early. Im a writer too(nothing here though) so i know what im talking about.
Hey I am reading your story MY HUSBAND. I am enjoying the story very much. Also you a very nice profile pic.
Hi... Everyone.. I have updated Chapter 3 in "Hide and Seek". Please read and give me your review.
Hi guys I just uploaded the 2nd chapter of "Hide and Seek". Please read and give you support.
Hi friends. I have published a new Story. Please read and tell me your review... Thank you
Hey friends I have updated chapter 6 of the story ' stolen child' please enjoy.
I am taking down the story 'Code Name Alpha'...
I will edit it and make it readable and publish it soon.
Thank you for your support friends. ❤️❤️
Hey friends I have updated 'Stolen Child' chapter 3. I hope you enjoy the story....❤️❤️
I have just published a new story 'Stolen Child'. I have only updated the prologue. Please read and give your review.....
Tomorrow I'll update the first chapter. Thank you in advance...
Hey, I just finished reading" My king" and it's a mind blowing story. I loved it .
