@RickVarshia
Hi Rick-san. I am Putri from Indonesia (nice to meet you :D). I think you can continue to write stories. Your stories are nice but needs a bit grammar improvement. I really love them especially the Rooftop chapter.
I also like your original art that you use as the cover. Ganbatte!
Hello Rick-san, my name is Misaki Rinko, one of the authors running the profile I'm currently using.
I just wanted to help you improve your grammar in English though your story has a good story line and such, what needs improvement is the grammar and punctuation marks.
I'm nit saying your a bad writer but, I'm just saying you could improve that way you would apply it in both real life and social life
P.S; I'm not being mean, I'm just helping fellow Filipino and Writer improve in the english language and usage -Since most people use the English language-. And I am also a Filipino too, but I am from Quezon City studying in Pasig City.
I hope you don't get offended, your story is great though! Along with your sketches, I can't sketch even a small bit near to yours, it's fabulous, I'm still learning graphs and calligraphy though, I'm always amazed when people show their Fabulous pieces of art.
@-_RulerOfTheSky_- No problem, I'm always happy to help people out, it's a sign that we are being led in the right path don't you think? :)
@-_RulerOfTheSky_- I appreciate all your tips, that helped me a lot. I'll promise that I'll use it anytime I write. Thank you for reminding and helping me for my English Writing Mistakes, I owe you my gratitude