Reemonelovesink

Sorry guys, the first chapter of Dark Liaison got deleted, so I had to publish it again.
          	I look forward to feedback from you and if you enjoy the story, kindly vote.
          	Thank you.

pretty_books8

Hi dear, thank you for a precious follow. I hope are fine. Give my book a try sometime and tell me what you think about it. Feel free to comment and vote. 
          
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Reemonelovesink

@pretty_books8  
            Okay...
            I've been through your book and here's what I think.
            Your story plot is really pleasant but your tenses do no justice to your story as they should. Work on your tenses and you'd see the big change. But to crown it all, its nice❤
            
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Reemonelovesink

@pretty_books8 sure.. I'll check your book as soon as I can
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bkhutso

Hi, I just finished writing this book. And I don't know if it will interest you. If not and I somehow offended you by messaging you then I'm sorry, but if I didn't, I hope you enjoy. The book's called The Elementorial. Thank you for your time. ʕ•̬͡•ʔ
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/313034415?utm_source=android&utm_medium=com.whatsapp&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=bkhutso&wp_originator=QCjt3Qn8%2BCl%2Fci7OqpI4amhvJvfK2FuDCvSUL2bLPskXHlqXypb1F08YRPESjoy%2B3eK6WDFK6lPgJ%2FJ8x%2F8o61inwhHJjOlCRYpFEvqtUFU0wojctT98m867%2B2u3DITE 
          
          

bkhutso

@Reemonelovesink Yeah, I'm still busy with that. Thank you
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Reemonelovesink

@bkhutso sorry I'm just getting back to you.... Your plot is really great and your book is nice but you need to work on your grammar and punctuation.. once you do, your book would be so much better. Thumbs up 
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