@Comiccop https://www.wattpad.com/1516072484-eggmans-helluva-takeover-chapter1-new-world-new read my pilot first so you can clear understand first and now i need some help weighting for the murder family eposied and this what i got so far for the opening The office of Immediate Murder Professionals was as chaotic as ever, but this time, there was a new addition to the team. Eggman sat quietly in the corner, arms folded across his chest, his cold eyes scanning the room. His once grand laboratory had been replaced with a tacky office in Hell, but he wasn't the type to complain. This was a new world, and he would conquer it, even if it meant taking on petty assassination jobs.
Blitzo, as always, was a flurry of energy and bad decisions. He was perched on his desk, listening with a mix of boredom and interest to a client. Miss Mayberry, a woman in her late thirties, with a look of both regret and fiery resolve, stood in front of him. She recounted her tragic story of a life stolen, a life robbed by a greedy, heartless woman—this snake, who had taken everything from her and left her to die in the dirt.
Ms Mayberry: I was a good person before it all went down. I was good my entire life. you do everything in life, play by all the rules, and still get sent down here with all the hitlers and Epstein's of the world after one measly massacre propelled by blind rage. So that's why I'm here. to get my revenge. A purple bull based demon who was smoking a cigarette informed the IMP and the sincerest.
I mean, was she hotter? Blitz asked.
Eggman raised an eyebrow, intrigued by the story. Though his mind was usually occupied with grander schemes, there was something... satisfying about listening to someone's pain, especially when they were offering money in exchange for revenge. It was like a twisted version of the business deals he used to strike. But sadly Dr EGGMAN sighed sadly at his so could
so what do think? do i need to star over?
