RecloySo

Hey people. Guess what? I've updated lucid you can't see the original anymore. Would you want to? If so,  let me know, but hey this starts a little different. 
          	I finally realised the actual genre was mystery and am also trying to make plot points more clear to people as no one understood what I wrote. If its now too obvious, and thus obnoxious,  let me know.

RecloySo

Hey people. Guess what? I've updated lucid you can't see the original anymore. Would you want to? If so,  let me know, but hey this starts a little different. 
          I finally realised the actual genre was mystery and am also trying to make plot points more clear to people as no one understood what I wrote. If its now too obvious, and thus obnoxious,  let me know.