irondad4life
Hey my mom read your stories and she said to keep out the profanity or change the words but she said that it was really good. She also said that you should show them to Mrs. Meyer. I agree. This is my feedback. Thank you for letting me read them. oh and the first chapter for Missing is coming i promise I showed it to my mom and she said to stick with it so i will.
RandomRedWolf
@LilianaLunaMalfoy Thank you for the feedback! I will probably change them to something less profane, but it's difficult to find words of equal impact. However, I will try my best- I want people to enjoy my stories, and if changing a couple things is what I need to do, I will gladly oblige. Can't wait for the first chapter!