RaeRaeWebbs

That makes total sense! Love that his coldness is just him hiding his nerves. Do we see more of that soft side later? Btw Some moments in your story feel like they could easily turn into comic panels. I’m a paid artist and I actually imagined a few comic ideas while reading it. Would you be interested if I shared them?

Haha that tracks! Toby's got so much on his plate, he'd probably miss it even if they kissed right in front of him. Love that for the drama though! Btw I loved your story! I’m a paid artist and while reading it I imagined a few scenes as illustrations. I’d love to share my ideas with you if you’re interested!