Psirah

this message may be offensive
hahaha finally remembered my password after 5 months... sorry :)
          	
          	Also is anyone actually interested in this story? because i'm so fucking bad at writing  my thoughts into a story.

hyuckluv

@RottyBear Your story blew up around the period where it was first published, and you had full support. I'm sure there are still people who are curious to know how the story continues. And writing is a skill that's developed through practice. Nobody is born with the ability to make a bestselling novel. The more you write, the better you'll become.
Reply

Psirah

Why is "this message may be offensive" Wattpad ffs
Reply

Psirah

this message may be offensive
hahaha finally remembered my password after 5 months... sorry :)
          
          Also is anyone actually interested in this story? because i'm so fucking bad at writing  my thoughts into a story.

hyuckluv

@RottyBear Your story blew up around the period where it was first published, and you had full support. I'm sure there are still people who are curious to know how the story continues. And writing is a skill that's developed through practice. Nobody is born with the ability to make a bestselling novel. The more you write, the better you'll become.
Reply

Psirah

Why is "this message may be offensive" Wattpad ffs
Reply

Psirah

Hi it's me again, as you can probably tell I've not been active for the last 2 months. Honestly my passion and motivation for my current story is drained and I'm contemplating changing the story because I've had a few ideas recently. 
          
          Because of this in debating whether to put the TikTok inspired story on hold and create a new one which I've been wanting to write for a while.
          
          If anyone is still interested in my previous story I will continue it but as I'm constantly mentioning I surprisingly have a life I'm forced to using so uploads won't be regular and will probably be few and far. 
          
          Makeing a new story that is compiled of many ideas I've had ranging over many moths should hopefully get me back into a happy mindset that is willing to commit to a story. So be expecting more uploads if this goes well
          
          Bye for now :)

Psirah

Hey guys, I just wanna ask you if in the dialogue sections if you'd like it if I were to put indicator to say who's talking because generally there will be large groups talking  together. 
          
          Would you prefer something simple like / "Hey Jeno!" -JM /or/"Hey Jeno!" Shouted Jaemin from.../ I wanted to ask incase you guys wanted more descriptive lines in dialog and for it not to just be storyline or wether you guys don't mind it being more on the simple side. 
          
          In the recent episode i've tried a simple method of changing the font of the lines but that has confused me so I think it maybe hard to keep track of
          
          As always feedback is helpful :)

hyuckluv

            
            @RottyBear I suggest you use "insert here" person 1 said, instead of different fonts. It's more common and easier to understand 
            
            And if numerous people are talking, you don't necessarily have to indicate who is speaking all the time 
            
            E.g. 
            
            "What time are we leaving?" Jaemin asked
            "Half an hour." Yuta replied.
            "Don't you think that's too early?"
            "I honestly believe it's too late."
            "I get that you're an early riser, but you're implying that we ALL should wake up earlier than five."
            "We either get there early or we miss the flight." 
            
            The order of who speaks remains the same at all times, which shows that you don't need to add more indications of who's speaking. If a third person is to join the conversation, you can indicate who speaks but if they speak in a certain order (jaemin, yuta, yangyang, jaemin, yuta, yangyang, and so on) you won't have to include the indicator unless you want to add details. 
            Hope that helped
Reply

Psirah

Hey Guys. I know this is like the third time i've said this by now but its ACTUALLY almost done :) So sorry for the wait but I hope its good, Im got a time schedule down to where I spend at minimum 30 minutes writing a night so posts should in theory become more regulated after this one is posted

Psirah

Also just as a little layout notice if i ever put ------- across the screen (not sure about mobile format but on my computer it's an entire line long) will generally mean a location change and/or time skip :)

Psirah

Next Chapter is coming along nicely, i'll be finishing off the last section of what i want to do and then its just a matter of checking it over for errors. The writing technique maybe a little odd for you guys reading since i've made it from a narrators POV instead of 1st person so "Y/N" Doesn't actually come in until later on. I'm expecting it to reach about 800 words at least as that is my word target for each episode

JustMeUnnie

Hiii when are you gonna update your Kun story? ❤

JustMeUnnie

@RottyBear its ok, take your time! ❤❤
Reply

Psirah

@JustMeUnnie I'm Half way through making it currently, I'm sorry for the wait. I've made a few different drafts following different writing styles and storylines (Both my own and the original tiktokers) and i've finally decided on one. It may take a little longer due to hectic family and covid schedules but i'm trying as hard as i can to get it out asap. If you go on the story there is a post taking about chapters and ill make that where updates go to say whether it is in progress or finished :)
Reply

Psirah

Helloooooo! So little update for you guys, the next episode will be in progress very shortly. Ive one more Assessment filled week after this one but then i'm good for the christmas holidays so ill be trying to set myself a goal  of 2 or more episodes by then.
          
          And as you know this story idea came from a tiktok therefore the idea is basically free real estate, anyone can use it and one user who is also making there own version of this idea has reached out to me and we are currently discussing ideas to one another including the idea of helping on another, and because i'm new to wattpad and how it works it was very nice of them to offer this to me and i'm very grateful.
          
          Please i'd recommend checking their version out and giving them a follow as well, i've already read through their posted chapters on both their side account
          @hyuckluv (Which is the one their take on this story is being produced on) and their main account @melonmorkie
          
          Thanks for following me through this mess and not completely giving up hope that i will never post another episode :)