PrettyLittleLies-A

anyone want this to be continued? please dm me this is my new account it’s been a few years:)

Hi! I've started reading your story, The Girl From the Bakery, and I like it :) 
          
          If I may make a suggestion, you could try using different verb tenses (e.g. present continuous, present perfect continuous) or different sentence forms when writing in any point of view. It'll help you show the story to your readers instead of just telling it.
          
          I enjoy your story, and I hope you don't think of my suggestion negatively. Keep it up! x

You should keep going with your histories.. People complain too much just let it be
          keep going xx

Removed my story, someone said it was to descriptive.

I can't believe almost 100 people have read my Story! I wish I had a few votes and comments though. 0 comments and 1 vote..

Everyone who is reading Secret Talent, I'm stuck on chapter three. I'm writing it right now..

Please read my story.