PlumaNiMaria

@JoanneOfHearts thank you so much for this!  This helps so much 

We all learn from each other. Sa kanya ko nakuha yung mga bawat break ng scenes may arrow, parang it tells the reader na, oh, next scene na. Hope this helps.

@PlumaNiMaria, scan mo lang for ideas if you don't want to read, she has a lot of visuals that depicts the character, the setting and the narration.  If you want lang pows.

Inked chains pala ang binasa mo HAHAHA. @PlumaNiMaria

Anytime. See you later in your story. We all want supportive environment diba. Nyt!

@JoanneOfHearts thank you! I'll read yours too. I like your feedback and constructive criticism po. Those kinds will help the writers