PlumSwallow

I should really republish my Overlord and the Rising of the Shield Hero book, shouldn't I? Once I get my drafts in order and get a more concrete writing style, I will! Every time I think of this story, I get super embarrassed because it's just _cringe_
          	
          	But I think everyone has that same feeling when they think back on their first bookd/stories 

PlumSwallow

I should really republish my Overlord and the Rising of the Shield Hero book, shouldn't I? Once I get my drafts in order and get a more concrete writing style, I will! Every time I think of this story, I get super embarrassed because it's just _cringe_
          
          But I think everyone has that same feeling when they think back on their first bookd/stories 

PlumSwallow

I have decided to take 'The Rising of the Shield Hero... But with a twist' off of wattpad. Not without good reason though! I never really expected someone to read it, so now that people are, I want to better my bad writing. I made this fanfic on a whim and it is my first work, so tips to improve my writing style are always welcome!

PlumSwallow

........... I suck. What the hell, I'm gonna get a o for my French test.... What the hell, what the hell. I feel so frustrated rn, I could cry

MrTvFace

Just hope you do great on your education
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PlumSwallow

@MrTvFace Lmao, didn't expect someone to reply. I'm already over it, it's just that I need to get 80% correct and I'm pretty sure I have one exercise incorrect. Which means I'm gonna get a five or something
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PlumSwallow

Okay, for a new chapter I need some info. I haven’t watched any anime in a long time so I don’t remember much. (1) But does Naofumi’s shield activate when he is being assaulted? (2) Can Naofumi actually hurt someone physically with only his hands or is that just not possible? (3)Does his red berserker shield activate subconsciously or not? Things like these help so that I can minimize the plot holes like Naofumi being able to see the status, name etc. of someone he meets for the first time. I completely overlooked that. Thanks a bunch in advance!

PlumSwallow

@KudarekuIshi This is tok complicated... I'll just make it so that he receives the hit, but doesn't feel it that much. Thx a bunch!
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KudarekuIshi

@PlumSwallow Do not worry about it, it is better to ask than to say something without knowing. And with regard to the damage they do, as long as it does not exceed its defense attributes, the damage is not so great, suppose it has 100 defense, if they attack it with something of a lower value than that, it does not suffer damage, that when it is damage only to his body, and let's say that the shield gives him another 100 defense, that is, if something attacks him with a value less than 200, his shield does not receive damage. (the amounts are examples, I think if there was specific data of his natural defense and his shields in the manga / LN / WB)
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PlumSwallow

@KudarekuIshi So what I understood is that, let's say, he gets punched, he doesn't get hurt. Right? Srry I'm asking so many questions...
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CassidyMcKee19

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CassidyMcKee19

@PlumSwallow Haha I know all of the guys in my grade 8 class were annoying and immature as well And hey, I get the crappy phone problems lol
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PlumSwallow

@CassidyMcKee19 I want to send it to you, but my phone isn't allowing me to. #CrappyPhoneProblems
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PlumSwallow

@CassidyMcKee19 tbh I don't have a crush, might be asexual/aromantic... meh, I don't know. The boys in my class are all just unattractive and immature
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CassidyMcKee19

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PlumSwallow

@CassidyMcKee19 Thank you so much! You made my day☺️
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PlumSwallow

this message may be offensive
I have an idea for a book (that I may or may not publish in the future). It's called 'My New Life As An Asshole'. I got this idea as a sort of joke, it's basically making fun of how many 'I Got Reincarnated Az The Villainess' stories there are. Do you think I should write it?

Desrie81106

Yes, you should
            
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