IbrahimH0707

Hay are alive

IbrahimH0707

My apologies 
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Persona5Royal267

@MihribanMahemut  Yeah,I'm alive. I've got lots of ideas for my RWBY story, as well as ideas for other RWBY stories that I could make. I will make a new part soon, just relaxing a bit after my exams.
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BluzBurryBlaze

Will your RWBY story will fix the plot holes in the show? *Ruby mom and Ruby being a main character*

BluzBurryBlaze

Also you should watch Just a Robot Video on rwby on you tube. It make also good points. As well other youtubers like Vexed Viewer, Eruption fang and Unicorn of war video. All of them make good video about the show and offer ideas on how to improve on them. Although it all up to you. Again I just want to give you advice on writing with ruby. But for a advice form me, have volume one forces on developing the cast into a team. That way it make it more believe able when they call each other friends. Thank you for your time and have a good day.
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BluzBurryBlaze

@BluzBurryBlaze 
            Thank you. But you should watch the video, it actually very good and make good comparing and good thinks to think about as a writer. Thnxcya
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Persona5Royal267

@BluzBurryBlaze no problem, it's nice to actually hear someone's opinions on the matter and explain the flaws they see. So don't worry about it and have a good day as well.
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