PDReaderfiction

Well, no more private messages. Is Wattpad stupid or what???
          	
          	What Lies Beneath is finally completed. I want to do more Palpatine stories but they're going to require significant planning, so probably won't happen anytime soon. 
          	
          	Thanks for reading.

PDReaderfiction

Well, no more private messages. Is Wattpad stupid or what???
          
          What Lies Beneath is finally completed. I want to do more Palpatine stories but they're going to require significant planning, so probably won't happen anytime soon. 
          
          Thanks for reading.

AprilJester

Please don't hate me, but I know next to nothing about Star Wars. Just as you did with my fanfiction, I will be reading it cold. I probably will not get to it until the end of the week, but we have until March 21st, so it's all good. 
          
          Thank you for pointing out my errors to me so far and I look forward to hearing more from you.

PDReaderfiction

@AprilJester Um, why would I hate you?
            
            I guess that's the drawback of having the contestants judge in a fandom category. Not everyone will be familiar with everyone else's fandom.
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PDReaderfiction

Midnight in the Garden has spawned a second prequel story. The first one is Masters of the Game ... Palpatine survives his last major political blunder, wins his first Senatorial election, and secures his place in the Republic Senate. 
          
          Now comes What Lies Beneath: Palpatine uses the issue of slavery in the Republic to make overtures to Senators like Mon Mothma and Bail Organa, position himself as an ally, and enact damaging legislation that will force the Jedi under the Chancellor's legal authority. 
          
          Of course, this is right where he will want them in years to come.

PDReaderfiction

So, as I have revised Midnight after writing it twenty years ago, new scenes came to mind which I couldn't decide whether to put in the actual story or not. One or two made it ... although, I can't decide whether they are cluttering things up and should be removed.
          
          One or two did not make it. I am posting them at the end now as DELETED SCENES.

PDReaderfiction

Good grief. Somehow in revision, chapter 31 of Midnight in the Garden got converted to a draft again. I kept seeing this notice that I had one draft and going, "But i PUBLISHED the whole thing!" I finally noticed what happened.
          
          So, if you were reading Midnight and wondering WTF happened to Chapter 31 ... it's visible now. 
          
          I'm very sorry.