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Going places.
Life will be beyond awesome and we'll live comfortably well.

Aang151Rron

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    @ShaneekaBarnett02 hey. No, I don't. I haven't spoken with her in a very long time. She's a dear reader but I haven't updated my WIP in a while so I haven't heard from her. I hope all is well? Have you tried reaching out to her through other means?

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    Going places.
    Life will be beyond awesome and we'll live comfortably well.

    amour_livre

    Hi Kehinde,
     I do pray you're doing okay. I think I'm late with this but......
    Anywho, i finished reading Bittersweet today, i have to say its amazing- no surprises there, you're so gifted. 
     I have no review for the book because i found it beyond my expectations especially that ending- definitely did not see it coming.
    There were tears of course but, what can i do? 
    Regardless, i did forget to mention something. 
    I absolutely love those post chapter sessions you have with the characters, they are super funny and also very creative. It would be nice to have them more frequently but i wouldn't want that to be a bother for you.
    Anywho, please take care of yourself,  pray and smile. 
    Bye

    amour_livre

    Hello Kehinde ,
    
    In my last note i said i would give you a full review of your book- The Sin. I'm yet to complete it.
    However, I'm done with The Sands in the Darkness night. 
    It was beautiful. I got it just yesterday but when i read it was a historical novel i couldn't let it go.
    
    So my review:
    Your english is spectacular 
    Your plots and settings are on point, a bit more improvement will always help but from what I've read, you are extremely talented. 
    Your stories have a good grasp on reality even though its fiction.
    I love most of all how you talk to the readers emotions and not just ears or eyes in this case.
    You had the very least minimum of mistakes in your book and that i truly admire.
    
    
    I would like to point out though that i see your method is quite peculiar to me. I'm not so sure about the ending especially in this book, i thought Tarzah and Aria would have the happy ever after but I'm glad the other guy came back.
    
    End of review. 
    
    If you don't mind i have a suggestion, there is an author here called @JasmynTailor. She is amazing and she writes Christian romances too. 
    She's very nice and I'm sure you guys would have alot to talk about. She writes mostly interracial, age gap ,modern stories. 
    From both your books I've read, (The sin and Sand in the Darkness night) I acknowledge that you do more of a 'finding redemption' kind of book. 
    Jasmyn however does more of 'growing in Christ' kind of books.
    
    Hope this wasn't too long. Have a good day, chiao.

    AElanSquare

    Hello, I just want to share and promote my story, if you're interested and willing to support my story I will be very glad. You can always check this out and you can also follow me for more updates. Hope you'll try. Thank you and Lovelots.
    
    Have a good night.
    
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      dallas1213

      You should check out this amazing Christian romance book. It's realistic and brings forth new light to the genre of Christian Fiction:)
      
      https://www.wattpad.com/story/321173212?utm_medium=link&utm_source=android&utm_content=story_info

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