OllivandersOwl

To the dearest You who's still waiting for the next chapter of "Lunar's Touch",
          	
          	I posted a note yesterday, but it wasn't there when I checked this morning. First of all, I'm sorry. I've been disconnected from this platform for so long now and haven't got the chance nor the inspiration to continue this unfinished story. I've been thinking about this for a while now, and I decided to take down the story for now. Someone was kind enough to point out that the timeline of this story is quite a mess. I took it as a constructive criticism because this is the very first story I write. I re-read the story again and found that there's a bunch of things I'm not satisfied with. Therefore, I'd like to take it down for now, just to re-write it again. Fix whatever need to be fixed, write something with a better timeline and all, and hopefully come back with a new version of "Lunar's Touch" that you can still enjoy and love. 
          	
          	I would like to thank all of you for all your love and kind comment so far. Thank you for taking your time reading "Lunar's Touch" and commenting that you found the story enjoyable. Hopefully we can "meet" again through a better version of "Lunar's Touch" sooner than later.
          	
          	Lastly, I would like to say that I hope all of you are safe and sound. I know that the world's situation is a bit peculiar and tough now, but I'm sure we all can get through it together. 
          	
          	Much love, 
          	Ollivander's Owl

yahdioinit

@OllivandersOwl i'm still waiting... 
          	  
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muted_whispers

@OllivandersOwl woah I really loved that story. But yeah I agree I got confused with the timeline in last perhaps 1-2 chaps? Anyways, looking forward earnestly to the new version you show us❤
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OllivandersOwl

@EstherNoyel Hi there you :) Of course, the story will still about TinCan. I will still follow the old story as much as possible, just need to fix the timeline and a bit of everything else. The timeline is the biggest problem of the whole story, especially in the last 2-3 chapters. Like I said, someone was actually kind enough to point out that problem to me. 
          	  
          	  Thank you so much for liking the story! I will focus to get the story fixed as soon as possible. I kinda have an idea of where I want to bring this story to. I can see the ending, but still need a lot more elements to tie the whole story from start to end. 
          	  
          	  Until we meet again! Stay safe!
          	  
          	  Love,
          	  Ollivander's Owl
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jupiter_ismine

Hi! Please let me promote my first published story here in Wattpad entitled Poems from my Dead Romeo. https://www.wattpad.com/story/229196983 It's still ongoing and it would definitely mean so much to me if you are going to read it and hopefully add it to your library. Please send sone support, you can follow me and i will surely follow you back!! God bless you!!! stay safe xx //jupiter// 

OllivandersOwl

To the dearest You who's still waiting for the next chapter of "Lunar's Touch",
          
          I posted a note yesterday, but it wasn't there when I checked this morning. First of all, I'm sorry. I've been disconnected from this platform for so long now and haven't got the chance nor the inspiration to continue this unfinished story. I've been thinking about this for a while now, and I decided to take down the story for now. Someone was kind enough to point out that the timeline of this story is quite a mess. I took it as a constructive criticism because this is the very first story I write. I re-read the story again and found that there's a bunch of things I'm not satisfied with. Therefore, I'd like to take it down for now, just to re-write it again. Fix whatever need to be fixed, write something with a better timeline and all, and hopefully come back with a new version of "Lunar's Touch" that you can still enjoy and love. 
          
          I would like to thank all of you for all your love and kind comment so far. Thank you for taking your time reading "Lunar's Touch" and commenting that you found the story enjoyable. Hopefully we can "meet" again through a better version of "Lunar's Touch" sooner than later.
          
          Lastly, I would like to say that I hope all of you are safe and sound. I know that the world's situation is a bit peculiar and tough now, but I'm sure we all can get through it together. 
          
          Much love, 
          Ollivander's Owl

yahdioinit

@OllivandersOwl i'm still waiting... 
            
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muted_whispers

@OllivandersOwl woah I really loved that story. But yeah I agree I got confused with the timeline in last perhaps 1-2 chaps? Anyways, looking forward earnestly to the new version you show us❤
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OllivandersOwl

@EstherNoyel Hi there you :) Of course, the story will still about TinCan. I will still follow the old story as much as possible, just need to fix the timeline and a bit of everything else. The timeline is the biggest problem of the whole story, especially in the last 2-3 chapters. Like I said, someone was actually kind enough to point out that problem to me. 
            
            Thank you so much for liking the story! I will focus to get the story fixed as soon as possible. I kinda have an idea of where I want to bring this story to. I can see the ending, but still need a lot more elements to tie the whole story from start to end. 
            
            Until we meet again! Stay safe!
            
            Love,
            Ollivander's Owl
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ManYiLee0

Hi OllivandersOwl, I am reading your story and am confused about the timeline.  Thought by the time Can and Ae went to search for Tin and Pete, one week has already passed?  However, in Chapter 13, it would seem that Tin drove out immediately after the hospital scene.   The following chapter 14, would happen one day after Chapter 13.  In other words, it would have been two days after the hospital scene.  Yet in Chapter 14, it was mentioned that Can was at their castle already which would only take place five days later?  or I have mixed up the timeline?

talkativeghoul

Hi i miss u .R u fine?

OllivandersOwl

@talkativeghoul still on process. Hopefully everything will settle down soon enough. Fingers crossed 
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talkativeghoul

@OllivandersOwl yeah i  am good what about u? Is everything settled now.R u not busy anymore
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muted_whispers

You good??? Its almost a month u r inactive

OllivandersOwl

@muted_whispers I'm not, but I will be. Hopefully. Thanks for asking by the way. And, sorry for making you guys wait for so long 
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talkativeghoul

@muted_whispers i miss her toooo i hope she becomes active sooon
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muted_whispers

@muted_whispers well now.its gonna be 2 months soon...
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