Pero yong ma eaadvice ko lang ay dapat alam po natin yong tamang pagsusulat, like kung kailan dapat e lagay yong comma, period, at tsaka dapat may space bawat paragraph yong story para di maguluhan yong readers.
Tsaka try to expand the main character's emotion whenever he/she face a problem po. Dapat alam mo pa'no e express yong mga emotion nila.
Then when you write a story, dapat unique yong takbo ng storya mo para di maboringan yong readers.
Yan lang po masasabi ko Hahaha. Good luck to our writing journey. I support you.