NoraeLover_778
Okay guys, I need your opinion.
I’ve been thinking a lot about my story Bad Desire. Those of you who read it know that Jay is portrayed as more submissive type in certain situations, especially in the smut chapter.
That wasn’t really my original intention. I actually wanted to show that Jay is just inexperienced — cause he had never felt any of this, and that he’s someone who doesn’t believe in love. Jungwon is the one who helps him discover the feeling of love — emotional, as well as physical.
However, I noticed some of you were a little bit uncomfortable by it — partly from that it’s pretty unusual role for someone like Jay, partly from the fact that Jay is older.
I’ve been thinking about rewriting the smut scene a bit, as well as adjusting some other scenes in different chapters.
So I wanted to ask for your opinions. Is anyone strongly against changing it? Otherwise, like I said, I’m considering rewriting it slightly.
Take care y’all! ❤️⭐️
NoraeLover_778
@leebits_feet I actually changed my mind So in the end I’m planning on Jungwon being top for the first round. Then change it for Jay being the top, so he can “try” if we say it like this. This is all for the smut part. Should I do it or is it a bad idea
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