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FaolanThunderheart
Hey, I was just scrolling by when I say you comment on a story. I decided to check out your profile and your books. Just some quick advice: you need more paragraphs, it’s really hard to follow with just one paragraph. I didn’t read the content, the singular paragraphs drove me crazy enough.
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NicKatGuerrero
@FaolanThunderheart thanks cuz I seriously suck at that and my friend is so busy writing her own on here so she cant help me
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