Myunzie

Oh God y'know I didn't realize how bad my writing was until I looked at it again JESUS.. well you guys want a "Sunny's Kind of" remake? I don't think I have anywhere I wanna go with the current story I kind of didn't structure it well.. I doubt I'll get a response but I'd like to hear any of my followers' opinions.. or people who just like the story can give ideas and opinions too. Not sure really.

trycikel

@Myunzie You're not an idiot. >:( Apologize to yourself.
          	  
          	  Thanks tho, I'll keep that in mind.
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Myunzie

@TrialKasai OH MI GOSH IN AN IDIOT SORYR!!!;
          	  
          	  Hm it's not too slow but maybe a little. The events aren't bad but maybe up the ante on how much each event plays into the story to make it seem a bit more moderately to fast paced!!
          	  
          	  Of course the story being slow isn't a bad thing it leaves a lot of time for development. So you can keep writing it how you are if you want it to have a slow pacing! And besides, my advice isn't really the holy bible.
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trycikel

@Myunzie I was talking about if the story itself is slow, like is it taking too long for the characters to do things? Or for certain events to happen?
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Myunzie

Oh God y'know I didn't realize how bad my writing was until I looked at it again JESUS.. well you guys want a "Sunny's Kind of" remake? I don't think I have anywhere I wanna go with the current story I kind of didn't structure it well.. I doubt I'll get a response but I'd like to hear any of my followers' opinions.. or people who just like the story can give ideas and opinions too. Not sure really.

trycikel

@Myunzie You're not an idiot. >:( Apologize to yourself.
            
            Thanks tho, I'll keep that in mind.
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Myunzie

@TrialKasai OH MI GOSH IN AN IDIOT SORYR!!!;
            
            Hm it's not too slow but maybe a little. The events aren't bad but maybe up the ante on how much each event plays into the story to make it seem a bit more moderately to fast paced!!
            
            Of course the story being slow isn't a bad thing it leaves a lot of time for development. So you can keep writing it how you are if you want it to have a slow pacing! And besides, my advice isn't really the holy bible.
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trycikel

@Myunzie I was talking about if the story itself is slow, like is it taking too long for the characters to do things? Or for certain events to happen?
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Myunzie

Yee I have a new story! It's called Oatmeal. Please check the first part out when you can!
          
          I would really appreciate it! So please read it and give me some feedback! I'd like to improve.
          
          I tried my best to make the cover, it may not be good but I tried!
          
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          Bai Bai! ♡

Myunzie

Also the OMARI story is my story, and ofc it will differ from the original. It will still keep the same general underlying story, but still be much different. If it is different from what you think the OMARI story would be, that's fine.

Myunzie

Made progress with the first part of the OMARI story! It will include some edits of OMORI art that I think will make the story seem more real, like that's how it is supposed to go! Hopefully it will be published sometime today or in the next few days!