If you going to try and correct me on my own book, get out and read something else. No one is forcing you to read it. People like you is why other authors stop updating. For one, I write for my own enjoyment. Two , I do not get paid doing this. Three, you’re the one who’s reading all this for free so be grateful you have anything to even read. Four, what I write is all raw and unedited. And ALSO what I wrote in the specific part that YOU tried to correct me in my own book is actually RIGHT since my character wouldn’t be calling the other one “MY KID” since in MY story HE ISN’T. so before you comment on other people’s book with nothing to nice things. Check yourself to see if you’re correct. ✌️