Hi Author!
I just finished your story "Pretty in Danger," I just want to say na the story is good, definitely will recommend. However, for me, maraming loopholes. I'm not giving negative comment, but rather a positive criticism about your story. I know you did your best for every story you write. Even I'm not a writer itself, but as a (silent) reader, I know you can improve pa your writing style, though it's okay to have typographical error and grammatical errors. Please don't take it as a negative comment huhu.
I will re-read it again your first story, hindi ko talaga ma-gets, marami akong tanong na hindi nasagot at the end of the story. I hope magkaroon ng summary at the end kasi hindi na-justify yung mga actions ng mga characters.
Once again, this is just my opinion, I don't give negative vibes nor negative comment. It's just my perspective about the story. I like your story Ms. Author! It's uniquely different—now lang ako nakabasa ng ganitong story and it's perplexing. Talagang susubaybayin mo yung next chapter.
Thank you.
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