MyaMooremiles

Hi everyone! I plan on releasing the second chapter of my story Valtieun and the city of roh in about an hour. If you have time could you check it out and leave feedback. Much appreciated 

MyaMooremiles

I have been re-reading my story Valtieun and the city of Roh and decided that i could do much better. So after careful revision i have edited and republished my story from the beginning. I would really appreciate it if you could read it and give me a honest review. 

daephnix

Hello friend!
          Thank you so much for your support on my book
          I just found your book
          I'm gonna check it out and give you feedbacks
          Thats a promise from me

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cheekypotaeto

Ok hi I like ur book. BUT it is in severe need of editing the hook is a-mazing. You need to punctuate the whole thing tho and edit it. Vocab is real good. Grammar can be polished. All's well with the storyline. It's interesting. Looking forward to updates.

MyaMooremiles

Thanks for the advice. I’ll go back through and fix it. Also, thanks for taking the time and reading my story, it means a lot to me!
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