Muffyn1

you can make a criticism some of my work?I will pay. sorry my english is not so good

@Crissie_Ess @QUINCYV Please unfollow me, if you wish. I have no intention of doing critiques right now as I have been disappointed by some other people asking for critiques when they have not kept their end of the bargain. Maybe on a rainy day I will read your stories, but I will not be doing critiques in the near future. Apologies. 

Could you plead critique my story
          
          Title: The pack

Hey could you critique my book...it's just one chapter so far (3 pages) I already followed you as payment

@MollySecretMagic Sure  - 48 hourss wait please!

Hey, could you please critique my poem? I only have 3 works and it it among them its called Quick. Im a new writer and it would really mean alot to hear an outsiders opinion. Thankyou <3

Thanks a bunches:))

@Alicia16b @WriterandReader7 Will do within 48 hours!

Could you critique my story please?
          
          Title: Make No Apologies
          
          Chapter(s): There is only 1 so far so just that one.
          
          Summary: 17-year-old, Arabella, has always had an ordinary life. The over-protective older brother, a father who is always absent, and a best friend that she can depend on. The only thing that is missing from your life is that one special person. When she starts to look at her brother's best friend through completely different eyes, that missing piece starts to be filled.
          
          Genre: Romance/Teen Fiction
          
          Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/7400884-make-no-apologies
          
          Password: kassean
          
          Thanks a ton!! :)

Saw that you were critiquing, so is it okay if you read this chapter of my story A Nightmare's Fate? It's just two pages. http://www.wattpad.com/20476435-a-nightmare%27s-fate-the-raven thank you (: