MochiTanjiro

Y’all! I updated almost every chapter because I changed names, designs and roles! Check them out

DoctorRundown

Hey! I checked your story out a while ago, I liked it. But there is one thing you could improve on, detail. Every story needs alot of detail to give the readers a very clear mental image. But overall, you are doing pretty good!

MochiTanjiro

Ty!!! Could u give me an example on which story needs the most detail?
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