MiraclePemberton

So, I finished and edited my short story The Secret of Fletz, BUT I have NOT updated it on here.  The reason?  I submitted it to a magazine, and as part of the contract I am not allowed to publish it anywhere else.  If I do not get accepted into the magazine I'll post it on here, but for now it will remain the horrible old, unfinished version on here.

MiraclePemberton

So, I finished and edited my short story The Secret of Fletz, BUT I have NOT updated it on here.  The reason?  I submitted it to a magazine, and as part of the contract I am not allowed to publish it anywhere else.  If I do not get accepted into the magazine I'll post it on here, but for now it will remain the horrible old, unfinished version on here.

MiraclePemberton

I got tagged by @Midnight_Kaiulanis to do this tag.
          
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          10 FACTS ABOUT YOU
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          1. YOUR NICKNAME
          I have several, but the main one is Didi. 
          
          2. YOUR EYE COLOR
          It changes, but usually green or blue. 
          
          3. YOUR HAIR COLOR
          Brown with blonde and orange highlights.
          
          4. ONE FACT ABOUT YOU
          I don't often finish my books, but when I do, I have a ton of editing and rewriting to accomplish.  XD
          
          5. FAVORITE COLOR
          Been leaning toward yellow, recently.  
          
          6. FAVORITE PLACE
          Very cliché of me, but wherever I'm with loved ones. (Also Arizona.)
          
          7. FAVORITE CELEBRITY
          Owl City. ;)
          
          8. FAVORITE ANIMAL
          Hmm... Probably a rabbit.
          
          9. FAVORITE SONG
          It changes quite often, but at the moment it's "Small" by Chloe Moriondo.
          
          10. FAVORITE BOOK
          Beyonders by Brandon Mull.
          
          TAG TWENTY PEOPLE:
          (I don't know twenty people on here XD)
          @Midnight_Kaiulanis
          @WindyWinter
          @sonderwolf
          @Emily778866
          @Blue_Jay_Birb
          @KillingMyCharacters
          @GingerlyAir
          @wolfy300
          @literalbrigadoon

MiraclePemberton

@Midnight_Kaiulanis It's all good, I understand full heartedly.  XD
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Midnight_Kaiulanis

@MiraclePemberton Of course! And yeah...my brain was failing me. ;P
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MiraclePemberton

SHOUT OUT TO @WindyWinter AND @SouthernGal01 FOR BEING AMAZING PEOPLE!
          Please go check out their stories, they really are amazing.

WindyWinter

@SouthernGal01 
            
            Winter and Nathaniel is a book I have spent years on, but it's still not done. One of my favorites though.
            
            Another Romance story, or PeanutButter's enlightenment are the only longerish books I've finished.
            
            (I don't know if this is helping or not, I have no idea how to decide which book I would read first)
            
            I guess you'll just have to see what looks more interesting to you. 
            X)
            
            
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Midnight_Kaiulanis

@WindyWinter You're welcome! But...any suggestions on what to read first? I can't choose. XD
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Midnight_Kaiulanis

Just wanted to say thanks for all the votes on my story! I truly appreciate it! ♥ ♥ ♥

MiraclePemberton

@SouthernGal01 Idk! But I'm enjoying it 1000%.
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Midnight_Kaiulanis

@MiraclePemberton I'm glad you are. When I first wrote it, I thought no one would like it because it doesn't have action and any of that, but everyone that has read it so far has told me that they have been sucked into it. I guess I wrote it in some way that makes people enjoy it?
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Midnight_Kaiulanis

Hey! I'm a Mormon too. Second oldest of twelve kids and a thirteenth on it's way! We're also all homeschooled and I'm an unpublished author also. I used to want very badly to be an artist, so I have SOME talent in drawing and making things. XD

MiraclePemberton

@SouthernGal01 That's so awesome! Wow, I had no idea people could relate this much to me. XD
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MiraclePemberton

I HAVE FINISHED CHAPTER 4: THE FORGOTTEN PLAINS FOR DAWN OF A NEW KINGDOM! I would really appreciate honest feedback it does help. Thank you!

MiraclePemberton

@savannahanks Thank you so much!! I really have been needing feedback and what you said will be so helpful! Thanks again.
            Love you too!
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savannahanks

@MiraclePemberton I read Everything that you have written so far and it is really good, but you dod need a little more back story, like why the Kedesh are attacking Ford, want why they want to kill  Eiri. Another good thing that could be useful is how Brin and Eiri met. But you are an amazing author! You really bring that story to life. I can't wait till there is another chapter!!!
            Love you!
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