@MikesCrackFics
Hello guys! So given how much I’ve kind of gone back and forth on this fic, I think I should apologize for the amount of times I’ve posted, then deleted. I’ve been watching videos on writing a story and doing so has helped a lot in identifying what works and what doesn’t work. I have a better idea of how to structure and pace things, and I also have a much better idea on how to incorporate the ideas I want into the story. That said, chapter 1 will be out within a week or two.
Just checking if your okay again
Yo everything okay mate? you have not really been active for a month and the fic gone again, something bad happen personally?
Nah it’s good lol, I’ll try to work it out again whenever I can but it’s been busy recently
Hey man I was wondering are you okay
Hiii, yeah I’m good lol.
Life’s just been really busy this summer so I’m someday once again just gonna start again from scratch. I had surgery like last month and so I’ve spent most of my summer recovering and haven’t been able to watch MHA, hence my lack of activity here for the story.
Hi , I want to recommend 2 short stories invented by MHA fans. One in the form of a comic book (https://mangapark.org/comic/99244/boku-no-hero-academia-true-hero-doujinshi ) 6 chapters each, as well as videos (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=85MkVs1zZJc&list=PLLmtAYJYwWSgywVelB7ESM8TMDiNFEzPo ) also 6 chapters each. I thought if you look at them, you'll find something interesting for yourself.
So the fic rewrite is basically going to make the charecters a lot better written, have better depth with them and moments with him and interactions, and help establish peters charecter better? while also taking time with each of the stories and chapters that happend in the show?
Like they say slow but not too slow but not too fast pacing makes great stories and chapters ;)
I think the best way to do is basically having like a bit more chapters at the start like the last story with the usj event was like im pretty sure 8 but i feel like doing more will help flesh out the charecters more and doing it before the big event will help
Bro I keep getting shocked today by everything I touch!
Man i totally understand if you dont want to do the Fic anymore due to college but why delete it? I just want to know the reason. I am not trying to force anything im just confused.
@MikesCrackFics Oh thank god your still here, I got chills down my spine when I saw your fic was gone. Im glad your actually doing okay.
One of the things I didn’t really enjoy was the writing of a few of the characters. I didn’t do them much justice, so I want better in that regard. As well as Peter’s development. Looking back it feels a bit rushed, and I didn’t do a great job of balancing him the way I wanted to between the angsty egotistical guy and the respectable hero that he’d become over a year. So, again, I’d like to do better there. I’d want to do better with writing out his growth, and adding more of an edge to him at the start.
Oh, yeah. See, I haven’t fully abandoned it. But it’s been a while so I figured I might redo it again, hopefully better. Not that I thought it was bad or anything but I feel now I could have done a few things much better. Now that college is done I’ll get back to it soon, and I’ll try to make it flow more naturally.
Yo what happened to the fic its gone?
Hi, tell me, have you ever thought about the story in which Batman died and was reborn as Peter Parker? (https://i.pinimg.com/originals/2c/d2/82/2cd2821229f8cca599fa5d69b82b2883.jpg ), and also (https://i.pinimg.com/originals/df/07/ca/df07ca1d6ff0b2ad316af9e36a216646.jpg ). And also (https://i.pinimg.com/originals/ce/57/47/ce574749d78b10606b7c0e3ec9bde320.jpg ), and more (https://i.pinimg.com/originals/8d/b7/c4/8db7c4160e8142d0ba826bd96b480e4a.jpg )