Hello again, Author!
I have opinions with the writings of characters in TR x SU book
I don't hate your book, it's just to show my thoughts about them
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Good Writing Characters:
-Afghanistan:
I like how she is a bit manipulative who loves Soviet dearly but doesn't like the kids, showing some good interests in her, this show more likely that she probably grew up on abusive household since in 1920's where it's legal to abuse females(1939 was start of ww2) and need love and attention because of that. But also being half-crazy? I love her more and her characteristic!
-Reichtangle:
Being supportive dad is just the best, also I think he help his son change since he also started a ww1.
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Neutral Writing Characters:
-Third Reich:
Needs a bit spice to him, his okay but he got stereotypical stuff, I'm also glad he does not act like stereotypical gay/any.
-Soviet Union:
Again need some spice, but like his a creep on first and made Reich fall in love to him?? I think he was doing is revenge lol
-Russian Empire:
Yeah, you were a bad guy in the start like Third Reich then you're now good guy.
-France:
Sweet person, but she can have some flaw too, not like she is perfect mother
Japanese Empire:
-I don't know what type of mother you are and what type of kid you raised but I like you since your funny person.
-Russia:
Your ok to me, just need some spice and a bit something that make Reader interested on Russia.
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Bad Writing Characters:
-Japan:
I'm sorry but, I'm ok with her being worried and sometimes silly but in my opinion, she like forced 2 people who were rivals from past in together? Plus stereotypes are just too much for her.
-America:
God, he acts like a stereotypical gay cousin who is obsessed with McDonald's :/