MechFall

I seem to have gotten an influx of followers after my debut as an Editor, uhm many thanks! Just don’t expect to much  I ain’t no writer just some wack job with an apatite to help out and as a bonus, lack much of a life 

@Analog_Raven Uhm just noticed, spelling police, should be Yang* and Story* Sorry! Also, I’ve been musing but what if the whole John was just like a  bait. Then Yangs tough act drops when she around cinder! Boom! Plot! Hehe, I’m just musing, please don’t take my word as law. Just a fan  Keep it up, I can’t wait to see what you do with it! I’m excited, I’m sure what ever game you pull will be good! Honestly, the change in Cinder was really cool, I like it a lot! 

@Analog_Raven I just finished chapter 5. I really like the way this is going, I enjoy it. It’s quite good! Now the question is how you go from here! Maybe Jang x Cinder  Duno, that’s your place. I can’t wait for more. I honestly really like he wordyness of this last one. More growth and store there. Keep it up!