Tartie_Lemon_Bun

Thanks for adding my book to your reading list!

MayaBautista370

@Tartie_Lemon_Bun Sorry for not replying sooner I was reading
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MayaBautista370

@Tartie_Lemon_Bun hmm your book is already very brilliant! but maybe the book could be a bit longer and include more scenes of Kokoro and Satsujin to see more on how he badly affected her, but other than that your story is super great!
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Tartie_Lemon_Bun

@MayaBautista370 any possible constructive criticism?
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