KimSunoo_143

Hiii I just want to promote my story entitled 'Almeira Academy', i am an amateur writer and i seek opinions about my current writing style and also an inspiration to continue my story so pleaaseee may i take a bit of your time and read my story? I also accept criticism for further improvement.
          
           Pleeeaaasse i need your helpppp please help me bloom (≧•≦)
          
          Just click my profile and works THANK YOUUUUU