MarioRobertus

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Certainly.. story is only about your writing and nothing else, fuck plot, fuck characters, fuck world building, fuck everything~~~

MarioRobertus

My reader in the past: Hey who is talking and who to who, this is confusing lol, I can't follow.
          
          *Fix that part by adding the character name besides the dialogue*
          
          Present day reader: The script style looks jarring bla"
          
          Me: This is why I don't listen to other and to an extend believe bookclub review is not useful.