@ManuAndhale You are never too old to start writing. And I would love to check out your work. Please let me know which one of your works you want looked at. If you have read my earlier announcements, you are aware that march and April are months I support ONC stories while completing mine. So my time is limited. However, I would love to give you feedback on your story, at least a couple of chapters when time permits. I would love to hear your opinion on Sal, Butter and Pepper when you can spare some time. My apologies, for it is not WangXian.