MaeIstre

How do you like my books please tell me if you found something wrong in it thank you. 

1coochieman

But I'm still reading so
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1coochieman

@MaeIstre I hope you take this as constructive Cristism and not hate but the way you did sold to a gang leader there was no hook everything was off because there's no timeline or drama...it's drama but you got right to it you should tease your readers a bit more to make it more interesting hope this helps in the future 
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MaeIstre

How do you like my books please tell me if you found something wrong in it thank you. 

1coochieman

But I'm still reading so
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1coochieman

@MaeIstre I hope you take this as constructive Cristism and not hate but the way you did sold to a gang leader there was no hook everything was off because there's no timeline or drama...it's drama but you got right to it you should tease your readers a bit more to make it more interesting hope this helps in the future 
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