MEGAMANZLEGe
Happy Father's Day!!
sheangeljada
@MEGAMANZLEGe Happy Father's Day to you too!! Also I just released a oneshot of a Sonic The Hedgehog fanfiction.
MEGAMANZLEGe
MEGAMANZLEGe
Banana
woodcrawler437
Hey chat is it okay if I draw Warren and smg5? :)
woodcrawler437
@MEGAMANZLEGe update: I am drawing them both but will switch to my of rather than my ipad because my apps are not cooperating. In the meantime I will do what sheangeljada did and insert my OCS into ur story "2 new friends", for fun. If that's okay of course!
sheangeljada
Hey, I just released the final chapter of Broken Trust
poxiMple
Hello, good morning/afternoon/evening. I was originally going to leave this message in Chapter 5 of Mario and Luigi in Remnant, but since I couldn't clearly shorten the character count, I couldn't publish the response. So, I'm posting it here instead. (It should be noted that this isn't an attack or destructive criticism, it's constructive criticism to see what aspects of the fic can be improved.)
Well, the truth is that so far the story has progressed fairly well, and (perhaps) to improve it I will contribute my grain of sand. First, some interactions feel very stiff or very forced, for example, Luigi telling Weiss to tell him what her father does to her and she just agrees, yes, I know she wouldn't hesitate to throw him into the water, but she should still show a little resistance since she is literally opening up to a complete stranger, the same with Mario and Yang, she should be anything but willing to answer Mario's questions that he asks her about what happened during and at the end of the previous volume (she literally lost an arm and her sister left her behind), she would be anything but cooperative with Mario, and I don't feel like the latter would get that involved in Yang's family thing, with the menagerie chapter, it honestly feels a bit rushed, despite the fact that I appreciate the nods to M&L brothership, it still feels like everything happens (excuse the redundancy) very quickly. Now moving on to Bowser, I really don't have any real problem
MEGAMANZLEGe
@poxiMple Valid. Honestly everything here is valid. As for the Weiss and Yang being resistant to the Bros, I think my problem with that was trying to write their personalities for the first time, and suffered as the result. With the part in chapter Three where Yang and Mario go to Blake's home, I was, addittedly a little confused as to how best approach it, and maybe have a small excuse to put a Brothership nod in there. Many of your problems with Bowser just being there will be solved in the next few chapters, as I still need to explain how he got there and I had the best idea how to do it. I tried to make B Jr. gain like a fear aspect because he's never seen the Bros do anything remotely close to trying to kill Bowser. With Kemek, well, how'd you react if you were shot out of nowhere? I've got an idea for explaining why Adam mistakes Bowser for a faunus for the chapter after the next one. Only one of the past M&L villains will come back, sad, I know. But I feel he really needs more character beyond the disrespect he got in his game. No. Most of Bowser's kingdom is still in the Dark Lands. Bowser fighting in tandem with the White Fang members WILL happen soon. Salem? You'll understand in the next chapter. I'm going to make Whitley and Ruby look up to the Bros like older siblings with Yang and Luigi having the 'kinda overlooked sibling' in their respective ways while the rest of the cast will be close friends, maybe do something with Juane, but I think he's a little overused at this point in fanfiction. Yes, I am very aware of the dump RWBY went to after the third volume, and while I may not be a fan of RWBY (I've only seen video essays of the show and the grave it dug itself) I am very much facinated with the concepts and potential the show had, so I'm weaving my own tale with them. Be assured, NOTHING will follow canon, and I mean NOTHING. Thank you for your critism and I'll keep it in mind for the future chapters.
poxiMple
@poxiMple Something admirable is that at least Ruby doesn't swallow whole the fact that the Mario brothers have just destroyed a horde of Grimm with shells and a window and starts to become half speechless because of how strange it is, also another (and last) question, Bowser possibly works with his new minions along with the brothers and team RWBY to defeat Salem?.
Patback1022
Hey is the my hero academia doom story getting a new chapter when doom the dark ages comes out?
MEGAMANZLEGe
@Patback1022 No. I am actually pretty close to getting a new chapter out, just had to get though a research essay for school. But trust me, when the new game comes out, you'll know what I'm gonna be taking LOADS of ideas from.
MEGAMANZLEGe
Very late time to release something, I know, but sleep is for the weak! Now, excuse me while I take a crash on my bed.
Eldritch_Luigi
What franchises are you familiar with?
Eldritch_Luigi
@MEGAMANZLEGe Since you're already doing a Mario & Luigi x RWBY story, maybe a Mario & Luigi x MHA story?
MEGAMANZLEGe
Forgive my absence as of late everyone. School is kicking into high gear once more and a research essay in particular is making me feel burned out. I am NOT abandoning me books!!! But, I am fresh out of ideas, so I ask for some of yours. They can be as stupid and crazy as you want.
ElizaWright975
@MEGAMANZLEGe ok, promise or no promises for trying for the first, by the way Kaity, Chris, and Pica owned by Mizanploz by the way(i know they aren't yours), Also i love your stories by the way in general i mean