@LuhvsAriaaa
ughghghghghghghghghghghhhhhh im in such a problem rn i really wanna write but i cant be asked ngl
like i wanna write a danganronpa kind of one but like im so ass at making cases n shit
Cries
check horse race rq
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Happy new year yall! Let’s hope I don’t procrastinate as much
@LuhvsAriaaa YAYAYAYA. btw im working on a survivalist book I forgot about and you are the protagonist
I love how no matter what I write there’s always a spelling error or some shit I need to pay attention in English classes more
Updates I made in the rewrite so far:
PERSONALITY FIXES:
Geo more bubbly and closer to bread In the first few chapters, showing their friendship.
Yet more calm and responsible, sort of holding the group together.
Aria more rude and impatient.
Bread quite tired and not really caring.
Showed Serena and Kayleigh’s friendship a bit more.
Gave Godz, Train, Maruu and Ash a few more lines in the early chapters.
Overall made people’s lines fit them better.
NEW WRITING STYLE:
I made it so that it looked less like dialogue.
EXTRAS:
Almost everyone was better introduced in chapter 2, except Maruu and Ash who were in chapter 3
Chapter 3 is now slightly longer.
I now have to rewrite chapters 4, 5, 6 and 7 which won’t take longer then around 3 days. After that, chapter 8 will be at and I have quite a good storyline for the rest of the book!
I can’t wait to continue, and thank you for all the support in these last 2 months.
Hope you enjoy reading, and merry Christmas!
*I meant chapter 3 will be out, not at. (Curse my shit spelling.)
Changed some lines and stuff in previous chapters so that it fit the characters personality .
WE’RE SO BACK BAES
Ya gurl has come to a conclusion - I will be writing another trials series with characters I made - but on this account. The series im currently writing will be on the main account.
Hey! Idk if you can read this but, I have a problem rn. So there’s another series of the trials (same phases and all) I wanna make, but with characters I made. I already have a few, but I’m worried that it would get confused with the other trials story I’m still making, which contains actual people who volunteered. So, js lmk what I should do - thanks!