KearaBoo

So I took your advice and went over my latest chapter to Complicated, I didn't do much because I didn't think I was missing much. If you want to read over it go ahead and tell me what you think. If it's not what you meant, you can tell me. 
          
          Also, I updated Sixteen and Pregnant which you probably already knew. I forgot how fun it is to write that story! 
          
          Tell me what you think. 
          
          ~Kearaboo

LovelyApple17

@KearaBoo Hahahah yeah I loved the chapter, I'm really sorry if I pushed you to update, I'm really Am and thanks for giving it time :) and the book sixteen and pregnant is just amayzing I love the idea and everythink ☆ <3 keep going
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KearaBoo

@KearaBoo I completely understand what you mean now. I was just a bit taken aback, I appreciate you giving me some feedback, and I'm glad that your liking the books. 
          
          I will try to update Sixteen and Pregnant when I get back from my dads house on Sunday :) 
          
          Thank you!
          
          ~Kearaboo

KearaBoo

this message may be offensive 
You wrote a comment on chapter 29 for Complicated and I wanted to ask what you mean? 
          
          You said I had some parts missing and I don't exactly understand that. I made sure to include everything that I could into that chapter. If anything, I would know if I was missing anything or not. 
          
          Also, I don't mind criticism on my stories, I welcome it even, but the thing is I don't like when people comment saying my chapter is and I quote "fucked up" you could've told me what you didn't like without being so rude and disrespectful. 
          
          I'm a fairly new writer, joined Wattpad in October and started my first story in November, so no, I may not be the best writer. If someone tells me I need to work on something I try my best to. I've never had anyone say something like that to me, so mean, but I've had people give constructive criticism. 
          
          I just wanted to let you know that next time you want to comment on one of my chapters don't tell me to update another one of my books. I have my reasons for not updating SAPWMBFB. It says on hold and there is a reason so don't think I'm one of those writers who don't finish what they start. 
          
          Granted, I would really like to know what you think I am missing in my last updated chapter, nicely, it would be extremely helpful. 
          
          Thank you. 
          
          ~Kearaboo

LovelyApple17

@KearaBoo I hope you understand me well
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LovelyApple17

@KearaBoo Honestly I LOVE your stories really, and I didn't mean To be rude, I love your work but in the chapter there are some parts missing Please check them Up, and about your other book Sixteen and pregnant; I love it the most that's why I told you to update becausr I miss reading it.
            
            I totaly Cobgratz you for your stories, they are realy awesome for me.
            
            And I respect you beying a new writer even your stories prouve the opposit, I'm a new writer too, I respect you totaly And I did never mean to be Rude.
            
            Peace :)
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