LollipoPReapeR

@DavonteMaddox 
          	
          	Sometimes I really hate the mobile UI for wattpad... Ugh. I can't find your other replies. Oh well.
          	
          	So Siva huh? That book I feel has a tonne of potential but has a lot of amateur mistakes with grammar, consistency and realism (well as realistic as a sci-fi book can get). After I made a tonne of comments on the second chapter, I read the author had actually planned to edit the whole series and re-release them at some point and I backed off at that point. 
          	
          	Anyway, thanks for your suggestion.

LollipoPReapeR

@DavonteMaddox 
          
          Sometimes I really hate the mobile UI for wattpad... Ugh. I can't find your other replies. Oh well.
          
          So Siva huh? That book I feel has a tonne of potential but has a lot of amateur mistakes with grammar, consistency and realism (well as realistic as a sci-fi book can get). After I made a tonne of comments on the second chapter, I read the author had actually planned to edit the whole series and re-release them at some point and I backed off at that point. 
          
          Anyway, thanks for your suggestion.

LollipoPReapeR

@DavonteMaddox 
          
          I've always written after my corrections, that if the author feels that I was too nitpicky, I will back off. I've always written them with the aim to be constructive rather than just badmouthing their work. 
          
          There are a few reasons why I am not an editor. If the work has too many mistakes, I find it hard to read through. I also don't have a lot of time on my hands. And I doubt I'm that good a editor, but if a particular writer approaches me, I will certainly give it a shot. Anyway, my grasp of the English language and its intricacies are often lacking when it comes to the subtleties that an editor has to/should catch.
          
          May I ask which comments on which book made you write this message?

ForToldKing

@LollipoPReapeR i dnt find your comment boring or a problem just there was a lot which was understandable and some not
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ForToldKing

@LollipoPReapeR  Siva and the legend of the destroy 
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LollipoPReapeR

@WillFlyForFood your book has really hooked me in lately. I'm eager to read the next chapter now haha.
          
          I totally forgot how long I've been on here haha. I was also a bit of a lurker before I officially joined but did take a small hiatus afterwards however. I'm often surprised by the quality of books I find here, which keeps bringing me back when I get bored.