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Lisa is the peculiar youngest sister to her two beautiful sisters, but other from that, she's very content with the way she looks and doesn't really care about beauty-that is, until the most beautiful boy she has ever seen comes to visit. At first she finds herself captivated to the boy and starts to feel something for him, but she is shocked to find that he is a bully, haughty and conceited, and he believes that only beautiful people should be seen with him. Everything happens so fast, and Lisa pretends that these beautiful monster words don't effect her.https://www.wattpad.com/story/366486202?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=233catsanddogs

Hey all while you wait for your favorite stories to update why don't you give mine a try? Dating Douchey Dev is finally complete and it's ready to be binged! Leave comments with your thoughts and let me
know your opinions! Common themes: indian, love story, contract lovestory, romance. 
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Dear Writer
          I am completely annoyed with your book "The Abondoned lady". I mean the starting was soo good but it gets worst and worst as you read...
          Seriously, the FL was only trying her best in throwing herself on the most shittiest FL.
          Seriously, the FL had NO Self-respect.
          
          And then people talk about women empowerment! Seriously, Wattpad is full of books, where the FL has no self-respect, only busy in self-pity and thinking that marriage is the solution to all their miseries... 

Wooooww, a simple yet a very interesting book. I love it, keep it up. 

Wow! What a way to promote the idea that a fat women doesn't deserve her husband's love. Only when she is slim and pretty, she will get love. Body shaming at its best. I guess your agenda was to show women as pathetic creature. And you did it well.

Pls, I hate books that excuses their shitty attitude due to chilhood trauma. Like, is it that hard to figure out yourself? And the fl looks like a contant lovesick fool who'd forgive someone immediately. 

What the hell,sorry for the hate comment I am about to say but,in the book abandoned lady. Her husband abandoned her for 5 years come back start sleeping and saying words of love in one minute then calling her a s trumpet in another and the lady still loves him.Is the go dump or just pure stupid. 

I loved the story and cried in the end. However I would have like more substance in the ending. He was a damaged soul. His ability to love was limited until he can take love in as something he was worthy of. He needed to let his pain out  as he developed insight into why he avoided a relationship with her.  He feels cold and manipulating to dump it all on her when she  wants a divorce.  She needs to feel his neediness  or sense it  over time.  And she needs to wonder why he left when without insight he doesn't know why he left. She being fat won't cut it.  Could you keep her fat  but toned and her self-assurance and accomplishments  made her beautiful? My thoughts.

Hi guys, would you mind checking out my book of poems that I just started writing on wattpad. It's called From The Mind And Beyond