Todobakudekustories

And Author-Chan your username reminds me of when Aoyama is giving Izuku cheese messages.

LePhantomCheese

@Todobakudekustories yeah I made this account a little after I watched season four and I'm "oh my gosh this guy is amazing" so know I use something like this for everything 
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Todobakudekustories

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I love you so much and the argument that was going on on your story is kind of stupid in my opinion. but I love that you don't take any of what they say into offense because you are an amazing author and I know how hard it is to find a good name for a story. so the person who said your story is shit they are an ass hole and they don't know how to shut the fuck up. But I love you as an author and I think you should write more for the pleasure of writing then thinking about what other people have to say.  have a wonderful rest of your day/night/morning. And thank you so much for following me I'm gonna cry. I followed you too.

HeavenAscensionDIO

@LePhantomCheese then here is a question
            why was it that at first it wasnt just ignored but I got told it wasnt criticsm at all and instead just hatred?
            so it seems you are trying to twist what was said at first
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Todobakudekustories

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@HeavenAscensionDIO ok we understand that you were just trying to give criticism and that you don't like how the title didn't go with what the story was about but you could have said it in a nicer way instead of just straight up saying that the story was shit. So if you do not mind pls stop arguing about this. We understand your statement it just came off a tad bit offensive that's why the other person was arguing with you about it. And @LePhantomCheese no thank you for taking the time out of your day to read what I had to say and for writing your ideas for many other people to read. To the both of you have a nice rest of your day/night/morning or whatever time it is where you are.
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LePhantomCheese

@HeavenAscensionDIO  The reason the original point was ignored was that they weren't trying to address the actual claim, they were trying to say that you were being unnecessarily rude about your criticism.  You can give criticism to an author without insulting them and all their hard work. 
            
            Stop insulating the people in that comment thread or you're getting blocked.
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Aizawa_Internally

Ello!
          I know this is really random, but I would like the help from an amazing author like you. I hope you don't mind but I had a story idea. Thing is, I don't know if I want one ending or another.
          Midoryia got framed as the UA traitor and is sentenced to life in prison (I forgot the name of the one AFO goes into but that one) on this false evidence and gets no Parol.
          For the one ending, Midoryia kills himself with a bunch of pills and cleaner chemicals in the Med Center, and for the other Midoryia is put on death row, the lethal injection fails but his arm has to be amputated as the injection was recalled but ignored by the prison, and ends up killing himself after being freed from jail.
          What one do you think would be better???
          
          I hope that this doesn't bug you...
          Enjoy whatever time it is where you are ⊂(^▽^)つ

LePhantomCheese

@Himiko_Foxy So I still think the second ending is better. Especially if your looking for a more surprising ending. 
            Hope this helped!
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Aizawa_Internally

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@LePhantomCheese
            Hello, I am so sorry if I ended up making you uncomfortable with the suicide.
            I am writing this myself, I just couldn't choose an ending. I also ended up rethinking a bit of the second ending, and am more than willing to explain the ending in more detail.
            Mdioryia is falsely accused of being the UA traitor and sentenced to life in Tartarus, as it is in both ways. In this one, he is also put on death row(basically the prison getting to kill you because your crimes were so bad, so it is basically just legal killing) and the lethal injection was recalled, yet still injected into Midoryia. It does not kill Midoryia like it is supposed to, and he needs to be hospitalized to make sure that the poison isn't torturing and killing him slowly. His arm gets amputated with the spreading of the toxin, and he ends up getting freed from prison; Nezu took into account what he said before he was injected and Tsukauchi deemed his words true. Midoryia lives with Aizawa until he can get back on his feet and into the real world again, and after a while he works at a Café.
            This is where I deemed the change was needed, as it was too similar to the previous one after I thought about it more.
            So instead of killing himself after being freed, he was chilling on rooftops again, and a Villan with the LOV pushed him off, effectively killing him.
            Does that make more sense or was I too confusing??? I can be really confusing at times, sorry if I was confusing again.
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LePhantomCheese

@Himiko_Foxy Hi!
            Sorry if you saw my previous message and was confused. I didn’t quite get what you where asking. I was wondering if you could explain a bit more about the second ending. Right now I prefer that ending but I want to make sure it’s what I think it is.
            Have a nice whatever : )
            
            P.S.:The prison is Tartarus
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