Cookies1475
Hello, this is the author of 'Gentle Bonds'. Thank you for adding it to your reading list! I hope you like how the story continues, and if so, let me know! You can also find my others on my profile page if you want to give them a read. Have a great day!
Cookies1475
@Lazybone23 Ooh, that's a good idea. . . but too late now lol. Yeah I think I was rushing the emotional development-- to be honest I was kind of having a hard time with the plot at the time, so I wanted to progress to scenes I'd already planned. Anyway, I appreciate your feedback. Thanks again!
Lazybone23
@Cookies1475 and i don't think it would get boring if it was just a bit less fast paced...you know?
Lazybone23
@Cookies1475 don't let yourself get discouraged by such comments, and maybe you could have just let them have a bit more time instead of directly after being summoned, maybe just a kiss directly but yeah, maybe he needs it in a month after being summoned to survive. I think that would allow a less intense scene... but yeah i will try to read it sometime again.