LaceySutton

Thanks to feedback received on "A Gift of Flame", I condensed chapters 2 and 3, scene 1, into one chapter. I think it does improve the pacing. Thanks, Joshua! I have left the part titled "Chapter 3, Scene 1" there, as a placeholder, so that people who have already read past that won't get confused by any re-numbering.  For those who HAVE read it.... I would be eternally grateful for feedback on the changes made *puppy eyes*

LaceySutton

Thanks to feedback received on "A Gift of Flame", I condensed chapters 2 and 3, scene 1, into one chapter. I think it does improve the pacing. Thanks, Joshua! I have left the part titled "Chapter 3, Scene 1" there, as a placeholder, so that people who have already read past that won't get confused by any re-numbering.  For those who HAVE read it.... I would be eternally grateful for feedback on the changes made *puppy eyes*