KuroTora

@angelapoppe :) started reading it, its actually really good :D

:) welcome ^_^

@CoraMay17 thats' s incredibly flattering. I can't stop smiling now

yup,I did. I actually read the while thing again ;D

@Juvia-Lockser-03 haha,welcome :D

@Juvia-Lockser-03  okay,no probs ;)

@CoraMay17 kk

@OfCloves  yeah, im reading it right now. Please tell me if the second edition is out ^^

@CoraMay17 well, I wrote this before Oda finished writing Law's backstory. and I usually feel more comfortable if my fanfic ties into the main storyline. so, basically the second version will be more compatible with the One Piece wprld

@OfCloves  Welcome! ^_^ I really Love ur  story, and I kept continuing reading it for uh.......7 hours! I got too attached! BTW, I'm still in the part where Usui brought the Straw Hats to somekind of place where he shows his memories. What is this Second Edition BTW?