Koolkolin

O k , so I wanted to ask this because I have been releasing a lot of questions and all that and non actual chapters , but I wanted to at least ask this
          	
          	In your full on honest opinion, you don't have to hold back anything. What is your full opinion about my nightmare book
          	
          	Again you don't have to hold back anything, you can be a little mean. If you want, I can take it.

Sithtrooper124

@Koolkolin 
          	  
          	  Basically what the other person said.
          	  
          	  I really enjoy the book, honestly I find it really funny, you can write humour pretty well.
          	  
          	  Only issue is spelling, and that's it!
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Koolkolin

@Koolkolin Thank you very much for being honest.
          	  
          	  I promise I will rewrite the chapters. Maybe add a few things I'll think about it. I want to at least get the other episodes done first plus maybe throw out a few more side chapters.
          	  
          	  But I promise it will probably Be a few more days before I release cabin forever. Because yeah, I kinda just now, realize how much I most likely going to add to it So I'm sorry if it takes a little long.
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TrojanKing57

@Koolkolin honestly, I think it's an interesting concept. Nightmare and Fredbear being drones and all that, being friends with Uzi, a brother to N, and Nightmare also eventually getting together with V (I can already imagine the family dinners with Doll. the awkwardness that would transpire!). though, I have mentioned this before, your writing needs some work. sure, at the moment, it's pretty good, but I've noticed a decent amount of spelling mistakes and such, but the story is still pretty good. maybe someday you'll revisit the previous chapters and edit a few things (and maybe add a few extra stuff you couldn't add before. just a small suggestion)
          	  
          	  overall, while your Nightmare book is interesting and a good read, it certainly needs a few improvements, and I have no doubt that over time, you'll eventually get better.
          	  
          	  now remember to always aim high and reach for the stars, all while being the light in someone's day. have a good day, afternoon, or night @Koolkolin, and I'll see you soon
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Koolkolin

O k , so I wanted to ask this because I have been releasing a lot of questions and all that and non actual chapters , but I wanted to at least ask this
          
          In your full on honest opinion, you don't have to hold back anything. What is your full opinion about my nightmare book
          
          Again you don't have to hold back anything, you can be a little mean. If you want, I can take it.

Sithtrooper124

@Koolkolin 
            
            Basically what the other person said.
            
            I really enjoy the book, honestly I find it really funny, you can write humour pretty well.
            
            Only issue is spelling, and that's it!
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Koolkolin

@Koolkolin Thank you very much for being honest.
            
            I promise I will rewrite the chapters. Maybe add a few things I'll think about it. I want to at least get the other episodes done first plus maybe throw out a few more side chapters.
            
            But I promise it will probably Be a few more days before I release cabin forever. Because yeah, I kinda just now, realize how much I most likely going to add to it So I'm sorry if it takes a little long.
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TrojanKing57

@Koolkolin honestly, I think it's an interesting concept. Nightmare and Fredbear being drones and all that, being friends with Uzi, a brother to N, and Nightmare also eventually getting together with V (I can already imagine the family dinners with Doll. the awkwardness that would transpire!). though, I have mentioned this before, your writing needs some work. sure, at the moment, it's pretty good, but I've noticed a decent amount of spelling mistakes and such, but the story is still pretty good. maybe someday you'll revisit the previous chapters and edit a few things (and maybe add a few extra stuff you couldn't add before. just a small suggestion)
            
            overall, while your Nightmare book is interesting and a good read, it certainly needs a few improvements, and I have no doubt that over time, you'll eventually get better.
            
            now remember to always aim high and reach for the stars, all while being the light in someone's day. have a good day, afternoon, or night @Koolkolin, and I'll see you soon
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Koolkolin

Alright, so I have another idea for a book and I kind of want peoples opinion on it I know people most likely not like this game since it's just another copy but I like it and I think it would be interesting with the reader.
          
          Garten of banban X golden freddy Reader.
          
          And if I actually do do this book I have 3 questions for people.
          
          Should I give him all of golden freddy abilities or just some of them?
          
          What should his relationship be with the other creatures?
          
          And should he be an enemy to the player Or a friend
          
          I just want To say in this book, I'm not giving gold a love interest. It's mainly because I do not see any of the creatures being good candidates for it I was thinking maybe Queen bouncilia But she literally dies in the same chapter. She's introduced in so yeah.
          
          Let me know what you think in your opinion if I should make this book.