KnightLilly

https://www.wattpad.com/729160868-i-m-p-o-r-t-a-n-t-please-read-this-read-this-right
          	
          	Oh my gosh, I just can't believe some people can be this awful. If you're not aware of this, please read!

KnightLilly

@BlissyMKW I know. I couldn't believe it. I knew there was awful people in the world, but this... I didn't know that people could be capable of such evil. 
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BlissyMKW

@KnightLilly I know there are some scummy people in the world, but...wow.  This one takes the cake for absolute scum.
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KnightLilly

@Reynoldsb I know. This is so upsetting. 
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KnightLilly

https://www.wattpad.com/729160868-i-m-p-o-r-t-a-n-t-please-read-this-read-this-right
          
          Oh my gosh, I just can't believe some people can be this awful. If you're not aware of this, please read!

KnightLilly

@BlissyMKW I know. I couldn't believe it. I knew there was awful people in the world, but this... I didn't know that people could be capable of such evil. 
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BlissyMKW

@KnightLilly I know there are some scummy people in the world, but...wow.  This one takes the cake for absolute scum.
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KnightLilly

@Reynoldsb I know. This is so upsetting. 
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KnightLilly

Hello! I just changed a lot in chapter three of Shining Hill! It was just going to be some minor editing and adding, but since I decided that Zander and Annette would have more of an equal part with each other, I moved some of what I had in chapter six, which was going to be Zander's point of view, to this chapter. I also changed a little bit of the dialogue. 
          
          If you have a chance, check it out and let me know if it's working or if I should change it! Also, I added something major that might affect the character development of Annette. Tell me if you like it or not. 
          
          Thank You and Sincerely,
          KnightLilly

KnightLilly

Hello!  Just added some things to chapter 1 & 2 in Shinning Hill. It's nothing major, just some more descriptions and dialogue. I also made it so that the third person covered more of Zander's thoughts as well as Annette's. At this moment, it is more of an experiment, so let me know if you guys like it, or if I should change it back. 
          
          Thank You and Sincerely,
          KnightLilly

Evenstar606

I like the new additions! 
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