Kiana_Maria

Turns out that eclipses give me a headache.

Kiana_Maria

At least I'm in tune with the universe.
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JamesCarmody9

@Kiana_Maria Light differences can do that to some people.
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Kiana_Maria

In case you didn't hear, Wattpad is changing some rules: 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1436342697-news-updates-upgrading-our-moderation-capabilities

JamesCarmody9

@BW4EVR Not just that, but in this case: it proves to be wise to call people to responsibility over what we write- I just went through the *actual* rules, and the focus is that they condemn things intended to cause a lewd response on the parts of the readers... that's pretty much it, but the call to decency is ideal, frankly.
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BW4EVR

Oh my. Thanx for sharing. I had no idea. but good on them. I literally stopped reading some stories because of how young the characters were.
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Kiana_Maria

Writing tip, something I've figured out: 
          
          When a characters moves a short distance, use the word "went": 
          He went to the kitchen. He went to his locker.
          
          When a character moves a long distance, use the word "walked": 
          He walked down the street. He walked down the hall. 
          
          When a character crosses a boundary, use the word "stepped": 
          He stepped outside. He stepped into the water.